ACT 1
FADE IN
INT. CHARACTERS HOUSE – NIGHT
MEDIUM Shot- CHARACTER
Character – male aged 17, with biology book in left hand and pen in right tries to revise and make notes for his biology exam. He finds it extremely difficult, he become quite frustrated and angry, he gives up and slams the book and pen on desk.
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Medium shot – Character on desk
Character forcefully slides revision book, pen and paper off the desk
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Long shot – Character on sofa
Character on sofa with remote in hand.
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CLOSE UP – Remote
Character forcefully and rapidly pressing buttons on remote. He’s irritated as he can’t choose a channel.
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Close Up – TV
The channels on the TV are changing quickly, there’s a black screen (its turned off)
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Medium close up – character
Character places both hands on forehead. Character is feeling useless and pathetic as watching TV and choosing simple decision is impossible.
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Medium Close up – Character
Character is not giving up he now tries to read ‘Of mice and Men’, he’s eyes are moving left and right their fixed on the page he’s determined to accomplish this simple task. However he’s agitated and finds it difficult to relax. He gives up and closes the book.
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CLOSE UP- CHARACTER
For some reason he’s determined to accomplish this simple task. He takes a deep breath.
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Medium Shot
Character opens book.
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POINT-OF-VIEW SHOT, Character at desk
Character reading the book. He begins to turn the pages. Out of frustration and anger the character vigorously close the book and slams it on desk. He then stares at the book with pity.
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LOW ANGLE MID SHOT - MIDIUM CLOSE UP – Character
Character with palms on head, looks downward and shakes head out of disbelief and frustration. It’s becoming quite evident that there’s something wrong with this character, and he’s most likely depressed.
CHARACTER:
[VOICE OVER]
‘what should I do, what should I do, what should I do’Cut to
Medium Shot - Camera pans to the left and stops at wardrobe. Camera pans to the left whilst he’s reaching for wardrobe
Character on desk reaches out to wardrobe.
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POV Shot - Character
Character staring at therapist leaflet and notepad, he’s deciding what to do which
is to either seek help or write a suicide note. He chooses the notepad.
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POV Shot – Character
Character begins to write suicide note.
CHARACTER:
[VOICE OVER, reading suicide note aload]
I love you both. I hope you know how grateful I am for bringing me into this world, and for your love, kindness and affection. I am tired of this life. I don’t know who I am, why the hell I am I here?. I have no purpose in this world. If were born to die then death……………………………..Cut to
Medium Shot – Character
Character tries to continue, but he hears the scribbling of the pen, he tries to continue but it gets loader and loader. In his facial expression we sense the pain of writing the suicide note. He head begins to ache. He gives up and closes the book.
FADE IN
OPENING CREDIT
TITLE
ACT 2
(Train scene)
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INT. TRAIN – Morning
Long Shot – Character on train
Character staring at the opposite chair, he’s in his own world. He is isolated and lonely.
Continuous
Zoom – The camera is in a long shot position, it then slowly zooms into character face.
Character staring out of window, we can sense that he feels zoned out and miserable.
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POV Shot – Character
We see what he is seeing outside the window.
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Medium Shot – Character
Character looking at the floor. He feels miserable and feels useless, and hates going to school, we can tell this through the narration.
CHARACTER:
Voice over
‘This constant struggle, I just feel this emptiness and despair filled with this feeling of hopelessness, these feeling will never go away. All the will and determination to fight on has left me. I just hate, literally hate going through the same routine, and here I am just staring out the window, why me?’.CUT TO
EXT. SCHOOL – Morning
LONG SHOT - CHARACTER
CHARACTER walking on school road, intending to go to school. As he’s walking two students walk past him. His walking by himself highlighting the fact that he’s lonely and isolated.
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Long Shot – Character
Camera in front of Character
Character walking towards school.
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Long Shot – Character
Camera behind Character
Character still walking to school.
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Long Shot – Character
Character walking up pavement to School.
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Establishing Shot – Hampstead School
Establishing the school setting.
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EXT. Outside School. INT. Reception
Long Shot – Character
Character inside reception, showing that he is now in school.
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EXT. Sixth form common room. INT. School
Extreme Long Shot – Character
Character walking to lesson.
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INT. SCHOOL CLASS ROOM – MORNING
Long Shot – Character entering English lesson
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Medium Shot – Mark
CHARACTER:
Voice over
‘Sorry I’m late’
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Medium Shot – Teacher
CHARACTER:
Voice over
‘Sit down your late. You have an exam’
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Long Shot – Character
Walking to desk
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Medium Shot
Character forcefully placing bag on desk and taking pen out of pencil case. He then looks at board
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Medium Close up – Of Board
The board says, ‘How does Steinbeck represent Racism in Of Mice and Men?’
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Close up – Character
Character sighs
CHARACTER:
Voice over
‘ahh not this’’
As he realized that he has to do an essay.
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Time Lapse Shot
Every member of the class is doing the essay, Mark isn’t he looks lost, miserable and has pessimistic though – we hear this in the voice over.
CHARACTER:
Voice over
Just look at them, so focused working hard for the future.
Once TIME Lapse is done, the camera slowly zooms into the character face.
CHARACTER:
Voice over
They think the worlds a perfect place; they don’t know that it can make you feel so sad and miserable. They don’t go through what I suffer; they don’t know what I went through yesterday, why am I so different, just why cant I be like everyone else.’
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Medium Shot – Character
Character with pens in hand begins to write. He hears the scribbling.
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Close Up – Character
Character head begins to ache as the scribbling gets loader, he places both hand on head.
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Medium Close up of Teacher in Class
CHARACTER:
[VOICE OVER]
‘Your homework for the holiday is to read Nineteen Eighty Four’
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INT. Library – Afternoon
Long Shot of Library
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Long Shot – Character
Character waling to book shelf
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POINT-OF-VIEW SHOT – CHARACTER
We are now seeing what the characters seeing, he moves to the shelf and with his hands he moves he’s hand across the books until he finds the letter N, he then sees a book called ‘How to overcome depression’, and begins to wonder why the book is there.
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Close up, Low angle medium shot- character
CHARACTER:
[VOICE OVER]
‘Was this meant to happen?’
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Long shot – character walking away from shelf
CHARACTER:
[VOICE OVER]
‘I am I destined to overcome this’
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360 degree shot – Character wondering weather to take the book
CHARACTER:
[VOICE OVER]
‘I don’t know tbh, is this pain and feeling damaging me, or will this hard time make me stronger? Theirs only one way now, I done know why but something’s telling me to to beat this I can’t control my future but I trust my soul’
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Low Angle – Mid Shot - Character
CHARACTER:
[VOICE OVER]
‘I guess theirs now way of knowing until you know’
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High Angle – Mid shot - Character
CHARACTER:
[VOICE OVER]
‘I guess theirs now way of knowing until you know. from this moment from this second I need to survive and not allow my self to be trapped in this intolerable situation.
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Long Shot – Character
Character walking back to desk, he’s intending to try and overcome depression.
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POV Shot – Character
He grabs the book.
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Medium Shot – Character
Character seating on comfy sofa in library reading the book
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Close up – Character
Character begins to blink – he’s tired after reading the book for so long. He sleeps but the audiences don’t know he’s sleeping.
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EXT. Out of school – Afternoon
Long shot – Character
Character walking out of reception school door, he intends to go home.
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Long Shot - Character
Character outside school walking down pavement.
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Long Shot – Character
Character walking through long road.
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EXT. Train – Afternoon
Medium Shot – Character
Character on the train back from school to home.
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EXT. Road near home – Afternoon
Long Shot – Character
Character walks through gate, still intending to go home.
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ELS – Character
Character continues to walk; he is walking down a slightly downhill pavement, he stops near wooden gate.
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Low angle Medium Shot - Character
CHARACTER:
Voice over
‘I know I can beat this’
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360 degree shot - Through the voice over the character talks about he’s negative attitude. He places he’s fist together and locks tense, he question him self and says
CHARACTER:
Voice over
‘Were did I get this pessimistic attitude from, now is the time’Cut to
Long Shot - Character running, camera behind character
Character begins to run through downwards hill, he’s trying to overcome depression.
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Long Shot – Character running – camera in front of character.
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Medium Close Up - Character
We see characters facial expression whilst he’s running, which depicts he’s determination to overcome depression.
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Ext. Office – Afternoon
Close Up – Character
The characters hand on door knob.
Character behind therapist office door, he reaches fir door knob, he’s trying to overcome depression by seeing a therapist, he’s trying to defeat it by performing the pillars in the book which include exercising (releasing stress) and seeking help (seeing a therapist)
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EXT. Road near home – Afternoon
Long Shot - Pan Shot – Camera pans to right whilst he runs
Character running steadily through a straight pavement.
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Int. Office – Afternoon
Two shot – Character and TherapistCharacter talking to therapist, he’s expressing his feelings.
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EXT. Road near home – Afternoon
Long Shot - CharacterCharacter continuing to run steadily through pavement, he sprints faster and faster so to dismantle he’s pessimistic feeling and to triumph over depression.
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Medium Shot – Character
Low angle medium shot
Character crouches down and breathes heavily, he’s tired after running.
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Long angle – Medium Close up
He begins to itch he’s aching head as he hears the scribbling which is a reference to suicide.
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INT. Library – Afternoon
Long Shot of Library
Medium Shot of LibrarianCHARACTER:
[VOICE OVER]
‘Wake up, your in a library’
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Medium Shot - Character
High Angle
Character stretches and yawns, he’s woken up from the overcoming depression dream.
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Close Up – Character, in a dolly shot
CHARACTER:
[VOICE OVER]
‘I guess I have to decide’
We dont know if he commits suicide or whether he overcomes depression, it ends with uncertainty.
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